Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are still required. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this century, because of a lot of reason like full-time job, new technologies, etc, people don't have enough time to care about themselves. hence they should have program to keep their body healthy. we have several way for stay healthy. the first one which is most people believe that is important is doing sport, the next one eat and drink healthy food and keep ourselves out of harmful thing which It will be discussed in the next paragraphs.
As mentioned above, one of the method to have healthy body is doing sport. when you do excercise your body penetrate adrenaline to your blog and this material make you happy and your muscle improved by this thing. besides of that your body stay strong, so some disease can't effect on you. Also, by doing some activity, your body burn your cholesterol and sugar, therefore they remove from your body.
however, people should concern about their food and eat healthy food like, vegetable, organic food and have dietary program. people mustn't eat fast food or junk food a lot. because in this kind of foods, a lot of suger and cholesterol stored which aren't remove from our body easy and quickly. so if they don't like to find heart disease or other kind of problem, they should keep away from that kind of food and eat foods that have fiber and they are healthy.
In conclusion, both of these two-way is important and they are like two wings and with out one of them we can't have heathy body (fly). hence we should have beneficial program for our life to have fantastic life with out less disease.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61594202899 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17990719507 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1804910661 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110089279816 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440513915703 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0155992778707 0.0667982634062 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0683461385135 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144960981555 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.