Some people say that the government should spend money on protecting wild animals while others believe that money should be used to solve many other problems in the society.
Discuss both views and give opinions
all animals and human have right in this world. Hence some people believe that we should care about animals and plants like human. this group of people try to pay attention to them like civilization and spend money to protect them. I think we should care about other all creation because they are part of our life cycle and if we remove them, we find a lot of problem. As mentioned above, all animals like wild animals have right on the earth like human. Therefore we shouldnt destroyed their house and environment because of ourselves. government should protect them in front of hunters and don't let people destroy their home. Also, they should inform about that, if people injure them, actually human destroy themselves. so by protecting them, actually we protect life cycle. however, some group of people protect animals and environment more than standard. they don't eat any kind of meat, they prefer to eat vegetable as food. unfortunately they cut part of life cycle and they increase some of the animals, so they change the balance of life cycle and its bad for us. In conclusion, I believe we should protect our world in front of several problems which is made by human. we should share our earth by other animals and live with them peacefully. if we don't do that they start war with us and one they we see all the earth destroyed because of stooped thing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, hence, however, if, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65975103734 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31008934916 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50622406639 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3310525289 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.8666666667 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0666666667 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200228739668 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827106994883 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602854454805 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200228739668 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.53 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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