Some people say that the government should spend money on protecting wild animals while others believe that money should be used to solve many other problems in the society.
Discuss both views and give opinions
Preserving wildlife and tackling a variety of problems in our society such as education or healthcare are among one of the most fiercely debated issues. While I agree that state budget should be used to protect wild animals, I would like to argue that the government should also spend funds solving other issues in our everyday life.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 338 350
No. of Characters: 1716 1500
No. of Different Words: 166 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.288 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.077 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.787 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 132 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 102 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 73 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.882 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.978 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.588 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.327 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.327 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.102 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast', 'in short', 'kind of', 'such as', 'in contrast to', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.263852242744 0.247107183377 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.142480211082 0.155533422707 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0817941952507 0.0946595960268 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0263852242744 0.0501214627716 53% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0474934036939 0.0437548338989 109% => OK
Prepositions: 0.142480211082 0.122226691241 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0448548812665 0.0403226058552 111% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.89782591768 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0105540897098 0.0326793684256 32% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00263852242744 0.00163938923432 161% => OK
Determiners: 0.0923482849604 0.0861772015684 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0290237467018 0.021408717616 136% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0184696569921 0.011925033212 155% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2100.0 1933.35771543 109% => OK
No of words: 338.0 316.048096192 107% => OK
Chars per words: 6.21301775148 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.396449704142 0.374742101984 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.316568047337 0.28420135186 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.227810650888 0.203846283523 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133136094675 0.137316102897 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89782591768 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.037074148 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491124260355 0.56093040696 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.5421158159 60.7387585426 83% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.8823529412 20.7743622355 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8071961807 49.517814964 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.529411765 127.492653851 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.7743622355 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.882352941176 0.814263465372 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 51.5391576749 49.1944974215 105% => OK
Elegance: 2.08536585366 1.69124875643 123% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418351972614 0.332605444948 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.141334624269 0.102741220458 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.226494858254 0.0668466124924 339% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.582878790364 0.534860350844 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.211435036359 0.148594505496 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162628618409 0.134430193775 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886140713433 0.0742795772207 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.428721552355 0.324371583561 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.299356185278 0.0638462369009 469% => No any connections among paragraphs
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264321174641 0.228012699653 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438199461344 0.058150111329 75% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 10.4468937876 153% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.