write a letter to your friend, Mentioning that thing you borrowed from him/her got damaged.
In your letter,
apologize for damaging the product
explain what happened
say how are you going to fix the issue
Dear Liz,
I hope you are preparing well for the upcoming final exams in July. I have been writing this letter to feel extremely sorry for damaging your favorite book. Despite that, some of the pages are totally unable to read.
On Wednesday evening, I was enjoying reading the book and suddenly my younger brother run towards me with an open bottle of dark black ink in it. After wards, he did not feel that, the floor was slippery and he spilled all the dye on the walls as well as on the book. I made my possible efforts to wipes the ink. However, I was unable to fix the way I received from you.
Right after, I took the book to the local book store and asked for the copy in same version and edition. Luckly, the boy had a look on the pages and suggested me to get the printout from a new book and made me believe that I can collect it within three to four days. In the end, I want to say sorry again for the problem occurred.
See you soon
pallvi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...aging your favorite book. Despite that, some of the pages are totally unable to read. On...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.18181818182 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.01989022794 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4647116721 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0909090909 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141268030348 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568668733654 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642895252981 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939498363816 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06583813532 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.