write a letter to your english speaker friend and tell him/her about you have change your work.
1 tell him why you change it.
2 explain about your work
3 tell about other news
Dear Julia,
I hope you and your family have been doing well. It has been ages since we saw each other. The reason I have been writing this letter is I got a great opportunity to work with the peel of region in their dental department as a senior manager.
My previous job was not my first choice. That was working at the front desk at Pizza Pizza. Moreover, the chances of promotion were extremely low. Fortunately, working in a health department was my childhood dream, which came true. I am feeling joyful after getting this offer. No doubt, my new career is quite challenging. Apart from it, I will get the chance to work with old-age people and in some charitable hospitals.
Oh! I have another exciting news to tell you that, I am getting marrying to my boyfriend in coming December. Furthermore, I bought my own car and two-bedroom apartment in Toronto. I have been feeling excited to move there next week. I wish to see you again soon. Let me about next month plan.
All the best,
Pallvi
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| 2019-06-26 | Pallvi singla | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Pizza
.... That was working at the front desk at Pizza Pizza. Moreover, the chances of promotion wer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, moreover, so, well, apart from, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58011049724 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49106948614 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.701657458564 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1124976406 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.8125 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.3125 16.8248392259 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161931935474 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415644918004 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493764976297 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106683390449 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543348526524 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.1 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.