Stores should sell local product and not the important food product. Do you agree or disagree?
It is often argument,Some people says that local products are more useful as compared to import goods from outside. Local items are safer than the export goods from outside.I agree this concept because its health to improve the economic conditions as well as its improve the standard of living of local locality people.
Firstly, Regional product helps to enhance the local locality growth.Some peoples start doing work in near companies and its provide the work as well the standard package on work .When the people start to buy local products its help to increase productivity and Government try to establish more enterprises for growth.
As part of this society will improve with brotherhood relation. Local worker will serve own family in better way as result they can send their children to school and they can take higher knowledge for future growth.
For example Small villages in India are still doing work on handmade products of mud and its available on cheap rate.
Secondly,Local goods are safe and healthy,Production of local goods are always on health material because they are easily available in local market.People can choose these product without any difficulties. Some products that are exported in countries for sale, most of these are not in good quality also its create problem for exchange if the store owner hold local product then they can exchange on same time.It will be helpful for maintain health in society.For example: In India still they are using the product Amul. It is local company which are producing milk, ice cream and other product with the help of material that are easily available in local ,market.
To Conclusion: As per above discussion, Local product are helping to maintain Healthy Society and help to provide work of volunteer persons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11945392491 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60184686345 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529010238908 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.8441607132 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.0 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277991210206 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121205360117 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613540805193 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142385784999 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672341351462 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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