The pie charts below shows the earning money of the City of London for the years 1985 and 1995. The graph show the comparisons between earning male and female executive on the various financial sectors for the same years.

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The pie charts below shows the earning money of the City of London for the years 1985 and 1995. The graph show the comparisons between earning male and female executive on the various financial sectors for the same years.

Given are the charts comparing the relation of London’s million spending and the man and woman annual salary in a period of ten years between 1985 and 1995.

Overall, the total income had double increase from the first year period, and man earnings are higher than woman income in both years.

A more detailed rate shows that total income of London City had £3,355 million which grew to £6,710 in the last period. Total earning graph depicts the double growth of commodity trading, and the double decrease of currency dealing in 1995, while banking and insurance decrease the income slightly.

Moreover, the table reveals although female salary is lower than male income, but female salary had a dramatically growth which rose up over three times from £10,000 to £38,000 million each year in commodity trading. While male’s commodity could reach £15,000 in 1985 to £40,000 in 1995. This increase also was followed by the rose of other sectors; banking, insurance and current dealing which had significant rise over twice every year.

To sum up, both London's earning and the Briton’s employee incomes had inflation.

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