You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property. Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say– When did it happen?– Describe the problem.– Suggest what could be done about it.

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You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property. Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say– When did it happen?– Describe the problem.– Suggest what could be done about it.

Dear Mr. Joseph,

I am writing in reference to the inconvenience I am encountering for the last couple of days due to the leakage of the lavatory water supply. I am badly needed immediate attention of you in that issue.

As you know, severe gusts and squalls owing to cyclone 'Fani' leave the coastal area a wreaked havoc. Unfortunately, our residential area, Cox's Bazar Model City, has suffered the most. To make the matter worse, our building and adjacent to have affected the most. As a consequence, the overhead tank, which is located just on the rooftop of the washroom of my master-bed is leaking continuously and there are several other visible seepages as well. Owing to that, the washroom is almost always remained wet and slippery. On top of that, if it remains unrepaired, it might cause a severe collapse of the complete utility system.

Therefore, I would like to request you to take an urgent step to resolve the issue as early as possible to minimize the risk of further damage. If you permit, I would call our regular plumber to fix it and will adjust the bill with the rent of next month.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

A T M Jakir Alam

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mediate attention of you in that issue. As you know, severe gusts and squalls ow...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore, well, you know, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70142180095 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63719270858 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658767772512 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3667637114 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6666666667 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.086387219912 0.216113520407 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0289397241446 0.0766984524023 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270754774711 0.0603063233224 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0439238880417 0.12726935374 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205253012046 0.0580467560999 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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