Government should spend money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?
It is considerable matter that in present time government should pay more money to build railways rather than roads.In my point of view if authority expend more money on railways, it helps us to reduce pollution and traffic jam and have a sound environment.I agree with statement.
On one hand,although building railway is more expensive, it assists people to communicate with other people to go one place to another place safely.That means,this form is safe and less accident and traffic jam,people may be reach their destination with in short time.people can travel long distance by train without being more exhausted.For example, railways can carry huge of passengers and enormous of goods at a time as well as it keeps us free from several sorts of pollution like air pollution and environmental pollution.Needless to say, by travelling train people are getting more relax and convenient to develop a country's economy and encourage people more travel train save the people from accident.
Moreover,it is recognized that if government build more railways road it helps people to save their money because,travelling train have not pay more money it is more less expensive than other transportation in the world,that is why people show more interest to travel by train and consequently,government needs to spend more money to enthusiasm to use train.For instance,in the develop country's like United state,UK CANADA those country's people travel by using train also it gives them comfortable and feel less tried as well as faster and standard.
On the other hand,despite of huge benefit of railways some people disagree with this statement for reasons.First of all,public transport is easy and more available to get but railway is not possible to stop in front people home.Finally,for building railways road need more money and have to concern administration people and so on.
I personally feel that government should spend money on constructing railways to make country rich economically .Therefore,government should spend money on railways than other forms. It is considerable matter that in present time government should pay more money to build railways rather than roads.In my point of view if authority expend more money on railways, it helps us to reduce pollution and traffic jam and have a sound environment.I agree with statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in short, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1983.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33064516129 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29032587497 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459677419355 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 20.2975951904 305% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 181.101951029 49.4020404114 367% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 330.5 106.682146367 310% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.0 20.7667163134 299% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.8333333333 7.06120827912 394% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243949073471 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188890880504 0.084324248473 224% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10259172307 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187774712869 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127654472859 0.056905535591 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.7 13.0946893788 265% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.55 50.2224549098 17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.1190380762 265% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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