These days many families move abroad for work. Some people believe that this benefits the children in these families. Others believe that it makes their lives more difficult.
Discuss both views.
It is becoming an increasingly popular trend for families to immigrate to developed nations for better prospects. Some people believe that along with better career opportunities, the decision to move abroad is beneficial to their children, while some think that it is extremely difficult for their children to adapt. This essay will discuss both views along with supporting examples.
Some people belive, as families along with their children move abroad, in turn provides their children an international exposure and best quality education. The reason for this that in developed nations, the education system is much more advanced and learning-oriented as compared to the developing ones. For instance, many families migrate to Australia for work, where the education system is of utmost quality and students from all over the world migrate for studies. Thus, it provides best quality education and international exposure to children of families moving abroad which would have not been feasible otherwise.
In contrast, another school of thought that prevails among people is that it becomes immensely difficult for the children to move abroad along with their parents. The major reason is that children, at a delicate age, are susceptible to peer pressure and lack of confidence, when brought to a totally new environment. It is evident that students who move to different countries face difficulties in being accepted due to a vast difference in culture, language and thinking patterns of the peers in abroad countries. Hence, some believe that after moving abroad, it will make the life of their children more difficult.
In the present world, it is becoming more common for families to migrate abroad. With this, has risen, an ongoing controversy of whether moving abroad benefits the children or makes it more difficult. This essay discussed both the views of how beneficial it is for children to move abroad, along with the difficulties they face.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 480, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'provides the best'.
Suggestion: provides the best
...the world migrate for studies. Thus, it provides best quality education and international exp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, thus, while, for instance, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34193548387 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79555913629 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496774193548 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4051973524 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.285714286 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400417251295 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154570556003 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944463048622 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268283785375 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348341045219 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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