The Chart below show the males and females arrested over 5 years and the reasons for the most recent arrests.
The two diagrams depicts the proportion of men and women getting pulled over and the inducement of them in 7 categories: drink driving, public driving, breach of other, assault, theft, other reason and no answer during the period of 5 years ending 1994.
At the first glance, it is obvious from the both graphs that the figure of males occupied the largest rate, not only the group which violated the most but also the one which committed more various kinds of faults than females did.
In terms of the pie chart, it is crystal clear that there is a significant disparity between men's and women's ratios. The arrested males number was about 3 times higher than females' one, around 32% and 9% respectively during a time frame.
Apparently, the root of violations indicated that men's misbehaviour domains are more than women's one, except for: public drinking, assault and no answer. In more details, public drinking took over the list in both gender with the digit nearly 31% for gentle men and 37% for ladies.The same trend could be observed when it comes to the smallest group, the answer, in which ladies accounted for about 6% and 4% in men. The opposite can be seen in drink driving when 26% for men and 14% for women only.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, if, so, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72685185185 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29968667723 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 106.607317073 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652777777778 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.2202316032 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.857142857 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8571428571 22.9334400587 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179111125871 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745586257584 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247507506162 0.0843802449381 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950623956851 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148071850353 0.0819641961636 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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