It's generally believed that everyone desires to achieve continuous success. However, most people stay in their comfort zones, feel reluctant to try new opportunities that may lead them to a high level of fulfillment. On the contrary, excellent people attempt to take risks rather than only stay unchanged.
Firstly, innovations from experiencing different stuffs is a significant factor for success. It is widely acknowledged that no IT companies acquire success without innovations such as Google’s Page Rank algorithm, Facebook’s recent refinement and Apple’s annual system update . Another more concrete example is that Airbnb has taken its place as a great competitor in both IT and hotel industry during the past decade . Its success may be chiefly traced back to the brand new notion that accommodation sharing can be more convenient and economical. To implement this idea, Airbnb did take many risks at the beginning, and it once almost went bankrupt, but eventually, with the increasing acceptance of the shared economy theory, its overall business expanded rapidly all over the world.
Secondly, trying novel things is the only way to develop a personal style which is essential for the success, especially in music and art areas. It is quite common that musicians and artists may start their careers by imitating others' works. However, the remarkable success never comes from this simple copy-paste strategy. Musicians and artists need to have a distinct style to fascinate audiences. For example, one of the greatest rock bands, the Beatles, is a pioneer in the rock and roll music who broke the limit of traditional rock and roll by adopting many exotic instruments. They even employed a sizeable orchestra band for some of their songs, which was very rare and crazy at that time. However, this own style which went beyond the stereotype of rock and roll music gave people a feeling of fresh and that led to their legendary in the future.
Thirdly, sometimes taking risks to innovate is unavoidable for success especially in high tech areas. Although we can escape from these risks, we can control them to some extent. Elon Musk, who is a CEO for several innovative companies including Tesla, SpaceX and The Boring Company, is a master of trying out creative ideas and controlling risks. In SpaceX, he was trying to make the first recycled rocket in the world, and he had made the launch day public. Unfortunately, the company encountered some serious problems in the development and it would be very risky to launch it as scheduled. After a serial of analyses, he decided to postpone the launch to reduce the risks. At first, people are ironical for the delay and thought that he might never succeed. However, the company tackled the problems and finally launched the rocket successfully, and the whole world was boiling over.
From what has been discussed above, we can reach the conclusion that staying in the comfort zone is the greatest enemy of further success. We should try our best to take new opportunities and control risks to some extent on our way to achieve our goals.
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- TPO-43 - Independent Writing TaskImagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do?-Interrupt and correct the mistake right away-Wai 98
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2608.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 512.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09375 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73721235035 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 287.0 212.727598566 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560546875 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 803.7 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2148322816 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.32 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.48 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124569104963 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033832193858 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398545460726 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773841231264 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392699746464 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 86.8835125448 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.