Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Over the last few decades, more and more people decide to leave their own countries and migrate. This decision may have several benefits for them, however, they can face a huge number of social and practical problems. From my perspective and personal experience, these problems can easily overcome by someone in many ways.
The first and most important problem is the fear that they might become a laughing-stock by locals. To explain that, it is evident that people who can not speak fluently, decide not to be a part of a group because they feel embarrassed most of the times. From my own experience, when I moved to the UK in 2018, I did not know English very well, so I was afraid to communicate with others and decided to stay silenced. However, in today's society with great and easy access to internet and knowledge, someone who is willing to learn a new language can overpass these problems relatively quickly.
Regarding the practical difficulties that immigrants can come across, such as going from one place to another, technology again can give solutions. Of course, moving to a different country means not knowing a big area at all. So getting lost can be very scary. Although, with smartphones and the internet, these problems could be eliminated significantly.
To conclude, the fact that these people have many problems in a strange country for them can not be denied by anyone. On the other hand, with their own will and the help of technology, these difficulties can be fixed throughout time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, regarding, so, well, of course, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90310077519 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71122022367 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8594002205 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3076923077 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154852460498 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533287418145 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445200768064 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975931810575 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265726825108 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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