Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Over the last few decades, it can be seen that our planet has been facing several environmental problems, mainly because of the human's activity on it. There is a widely held view, that the extinction of a variety of plants and animals is the biggest problem nowadays, while others claim that there are problems extremely more significant, like overpopulation. This essay will discuss both views.
The loss of biodiversity in plants and animals is the main concern of our time because without it there is no future for humanity. To explain that, without several plants, there would be no oxygen and without bees, for example, to pollinate other plants there would not be any fruits. As a result, the population on Earth would be in trouble.
Another reason that shows how significant is to maintain the biodiversity is the climate change that happens due to the loss of many species. According to new researches, climate change is the outcome not only from global warming but also from even the smallest activity that could change how the environment has to be. Killing bugs in corp fields, for instance, is climate change, because bugs are in their natural environment and we remove them from it violently, so we change the environment and in the end the climate.
A big part of our society believes that overpopulation of Earth is more important than biodiversity. The term overpopulation means actually that our planet has more people that it should have. As a result of that, there are many problems related to overpopulation, such as food problems ( not enough food for everyone), accommodation problems which can lead to deforestation in order to build new houses.
Personally, I believe that all these problems have a huge bad impact on our lives and we don't have to argue whether or not biodiversity is more important that overpopulation or other environmental problems. The environment is in danger because of mistakes that happened in the past, however, we have to try to fix these mistakes. In conclusion, the loss of biodiversity and overpopulation are serious problems and conflicts within people for them is making the situation even worse.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02506963788 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92756732544 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512534818942 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7898980235 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.266666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219389128829 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717781112006 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570812989709 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121136013762 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707417233256 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.