Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Recently, it is said that the primary issue affecting the environment is the significant decrease of flora and fauna while some people propose that there are a variety of reasons leading to our ecological troubles.
It is reasonable to say that plants and animals play important parts in our ecosystem. To be precise, plants help reduce consequences of exhaust fume through exchanging dioxide carbon and they could avoid soil erosion by plenty of forests and jungles. Besides that, animals also contribute to this planet's diversity of species, maintain the chain of food for several people. Therefore, it is probably suitable to insist that flora and fauna is one of the crucial cogs of our ecosystem and human beings can not live without these species.
Nevertheless, some people argue that apart from plants and animals, there are a myriad of issues impacting on our environment. Particularly, they include deforestation to construct entertainment services and farms, consuming fossil fuel, discharging polluted water into rivers, disposing of electrical devices and plastic rubbish and so on. Most of them result in many environmental problems, namely severe global warming every year. Besides, deforestation and releasing plastic products into the water also devastate inhabitants of several species. Therefore, it is possible to conclude that other problems also affect the shortage of plants and animals, and then impact significantly on our planet at all.
In my point of view, I strongly agree that both the lack of special kinds of plants and animals and other problems affect our environment seriously. Therefore, each issue which is harmful to the Earth should be concerned and people should give some practical solutions to save our houses.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'planets'' or 'planet's'?
Suggestion: planets'; planet's
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...rt from plants and animals, there are a myriad of issues impacting on our environment....
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ct our environment seriously. Therefore, each issue which is harmful to the Earth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38405797101 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82585469131 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623188405797 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0436899156 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.833333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233522895855 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08176420713 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711406182236 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122722366089 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445639462938 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.