Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In the era of integration, I strongly agree that music is one of the common-used means which has such a powerful effect to connect people from different nationalities and ages.
One reason for this idea is that music is unlike speech, it does not require people to make efforts to understand the language to enjoy the songs. It simply attracts societies’ attentions through catchy lyrics and tunes or even trendy dances. For example, people from many countries and ages are also similar to some massive hits in the world such as Moonlight Sonata by Beethoven, Kiss the Rain by Yurima or Happy New Year by ABBA. Hence, people just need to consider that some lyrics are attractive and then sing along, dance or enjoy together to share their favorite genres of music. As a result, music deserves being a universal language that can link people around the globe without the barriers of customs or generations.
Besides that, the next primary factor resulting in this issue is that music is attributed as the most effective means to convey emotions. People seem to have a wide range of songs to express their emotions like love, happiness, sorrow and fear. For instance, the majority of citizens from rural areas to metropolitan regions turn on or cover playlists relating to Christmas and New Year whenever a new year is coming so that people can share a happy and warm atmosphere together. Therefore, it is not exaggerating to say that music always plays an important role in our lives.
In conclusion, I completely believe that music can act as effective means to connect human beings together in every case regardless of nationalities or generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 621, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to be'.
Suggestion: to be
...s of music. As a result, music deserves being a universal language that can link peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96415770609 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71347707274 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602150537634 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.4134683529 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.909090909 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207565600361 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726938742932 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373755587955 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112585885438 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529848941955 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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