Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is claimed that music as a good way can persuade people regardless of differences in age and culture to connect. Although this trend could not be impressive in some respects, for the most part, I am of the opinion that it would be an efficacious and robust approach.
To start with, this approach cannot act as a medium to cut the differences between generations and cultures in some instances this is because some music styles make a controversial situation like rap that is a type of music of black people in which words are recited rapidly. This style is not accepted by some communities since most lyrics be written offensively and critically. In addition, people with religious backgrounds mostly against the music because of the conservative character they have. So this approach would not be successful to come people together in such cases.
Furthermore, a more effective way of music can elevate connection between people in the world is universal expressing not only cut the rate of stress, but also stimulate their emotions to bring them closer to each other with pleasant rhythm and novel experience. And also it seems people taste is likely to be modified in the long run which people regardless of culture and age-specific listen to various rhythms in music and even receive the message of it. One great example of this is the music of Bob Marley from a small country where culture has become influential around the world. This is because universal expressing feelings of love, empathy and positivity that give to common ground and issues. Besides music events help to build cross-culture communications and stretch out[extend] cultural diversity between people.
In conclusion, I would qualify the assertion that music is an effective method to reduce the generational barriers as well as the cultural gaps in the cross-cultural relationships all around the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10322580645 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89310062346 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567741935484 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.6414782875 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.833333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335434415193 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123691237581 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777868011879 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197523399714 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073928156492 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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