Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
For the last decades, music has become a vital way in what people can not only release emotions but also even make connections between generations. While some people suggest that music is just the way to relax from the routine job, I agree that music helps to rally people with different cultures, age and nationality.
Without doubts, music is one of the forms which can connect people with various nations and mentality. It is not surprising to see music lovers of different age groups listen to music together. For example, retro music concerts of the '80s and '90s are very popular in Russia and teenagers from fifteen to eighteen years old enjoy attending such events with friends or even parents.
However, there are some factors, such as genre and direction in music can cause some disagreements. For instance, for a person who enjoys rock or classical music attending pop or rap concerts will be an unpleasant waste of time. Or if someone does not speak in English and does not understand the meaning of foreign words, it might be boring discussing songs. It can cause disharmony in socializing.
Nevertheless, music can convey some ideology of various cultures and ancient tribes, show the destiny of the past of villagers' lives. Listening to these magnificent sounds and tunes people may not only know bliss and realize the unique value of ancient times.
In general, I believe that music is an indispensable base in understanding cultural values, mentality and even can combine thoughts of diverse age groups and races. Responding to this music waves we can learn to understand people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, while, for example, for instance, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05992509363 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6383421878 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606741573034 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.292275384 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.923076923 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274386865365 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956188437905 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854140703195 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151107516032 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931613676139 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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