Over the past centuries, the definition of happiness is always being the goal of human's pursuit, but what happiness exactly is? It is difficult to interpret the concept of happiness. While some people think that happiness is the success in wealth and material archives, others think it lies in the mental value such as love, mutual understanding, sharing. This question has never ceased to draw public attention and provoke debate.
The differences in the way people definite happiness are derived from the distinction in lifestyle and thoughtfulness of people. Depending on the environment, which nourish them, and the experience in life of each person, everyone will has their answers about what happiness is. For example, the man, who lives in the poor condition, he cannot get access to the best things like higher education, high living standards, more nutrient meals, he will interpret happiness is he can gain everything mentioned previously and improve his life quality. Meanwhile, the man, who lives in fulfil condition but having psychological problem such as loneliness, having many transient, superficial relation, stressful in business, he tends to understand that happiness is having a tranquil relation and inner peace. This example indicates that the individual's concept of happiness relies on the situation of each person.
Of course, factors such as loving relationships, good health, the skills to earn a living and a peaceful environment all contribute to our happiness too. But this does not mean that people without these conditions cannot be happy. In my opinion, the most importance factor of happiness is nothing but human. Actually, happiness is a part of human's emotion, which just archived only when do human meet any need. Therefore, human will reach the highest level of happiness if they have an accurate goal to archive and their mind have not been occupied by worse things.
In conclusion, happiness has many different ways to define, as the saying "every garden has its weed" everyone has his or her answer about this. However, people absolutely gain self-awareness by regulating their lifestyle as mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 116, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...e in life of each person, everyone will has their answers about what happiness is. ...
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Line 4, column 714, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... peace. This example indicates that the individuals concept of happiness relies on the situ...
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Line 9, column 30, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...things. In conclusion, happiness has many different ways to define, as the saying 'eve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, of course, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35964912281 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87292419742 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616959064327 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6012745169 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5625 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168391898821 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587653363929 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609231617618 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795468580845 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406243529963 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.