You recently traveled on a train which arrived very late, and then you faced many problems. Write a letter to the owner of the company. In your letter, you should tell:
- Where you were going
- What problems you faced
- What action you would like the owner to take
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the time punctuation of the train service.
Recently I was on-boarded on TR244 train which is service between downtown and cape town. I regret to let you know that the service is terrible as since last two-week train is regularly late by twelve to fifteen minutes late. it supposed to reach at cape town station at 11:00 but it reached at 12:00 which resulted in an hour delay to reach downtown.
I am the regular traveller of this train as I am working in the downtown area, because of the delay I not only reached at work late but I also had to pay a fine of $300 for being late. this is unacceptable when the company is reputed for being on time. because of some drivers, the reputation of the firm and passengers should not suffer.
I would like you to take disciplinary measures with the person responsible for this delay, in addition, I also like to have a discount on my next monthly pass to cover the cost of trouble I have been put through because of the delay.
I look forward to getting a positive response and improvement in the service.
Your's faithfully,
Nandan Pandya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rvice between downtown and cape town. I regret to let you know that the service is terrible a...
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...late by twelve to fifteen minutes late. it supposed to reach at cape town station ...
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...had to pay a fine of 00 for being late. this is unacceptable when the company is rep...
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Suggestion: Because
...e company is reputed for being on time. because of some drivers, the reputation of the ...
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Suggestion:
...t in the service. Yours faithfully, Nandan Pandya
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65714285714 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61871859405 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585714285714 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0723160944 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147829697967 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502609636484 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477419493269 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.067010253573 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418025309524 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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