At the present time, the population of some countries include a relatively large number of young adults, comparatively with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweighs the disadvantages
In this contemporary era, few nations consist huge number of adolescents as part of the population than the aged people. In my perspective, it has some drawbacks but larger youth means to bright future of the country.
On of the main disadvantage of having more youngsters is getting less opportunity to secure a job. Every country has certain amount of job availability. Huge number of young people demands huge number of jobs. As Government is unable to provide them job, those countries are fighting with unemployment that is enough reason to exacerbate the whole situation of a country. Furthermore, elderly people have more experience and historical knowledge that are indispensable in decision making. They are often considered as better fit in the decision making positions and the tax they have paid their entire life made the progress of the country in many possible ways.
On the other hand, young people are full with energy and new ideas. They are dynamic and contribute to any field of the industry. They can cope up with the fast pace of evolving technology and also can adapt any invention and enhance it's progress with their ideas. They are free from superstitions and traditional beliefs. This gives them a competitive advantage for the faster development with the country. In addition, educated young people is the best resource of a country can have and their involvement to the country is significantly higher than the participation of the senior people. Also, youth is the future of a country and they are the earning members of the family while children and aged people are dependent on them. Nowadays IT companies are full of fresh minds and this sector is considered to be the most prominent aspect of well round of a nation.
To recapitulate, aged citizens should not be considered as burden to the society. However, youth have more to contribute to society and nation as a whole. So it is beneficial to have active workforce than dependent senior citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... enhance its progress with their ideas. They are free from superstitions and traditi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82499934165 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53313253012 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2839643523 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3684210526 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4736842105 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42105263158 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17485168234 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048597911162 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052053172438 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971636671834 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567394094098 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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