The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years.
Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
You should write at least 250 words.
In today's society women get equal opportunity and importance in the society. Many people believe that younger generations are not getting proper care as their mother is working, which results in several issues like juvenile crimes. I do not accord with this notion, as both parents are equally responsible for upbringing of a child.
To embark on, as society realise the importance of women education, many women are able to complete their basic education, especially in countries like India, which in turn enables them to work like men. Yes, I do accord that earlier women stayed at home, and looked after household chores and their children. But, due the increase in cost of living, single income for a family is not enough, which encourage both parents to work and parents could not give much time to their children. However, can we blame only working mother if their child is not doing well in school? Father is also equally responsible if there is anything wrong with the upbringing of a child.
Furthermore, a child takes a wrong path if his/her schooling is not right, if his/her friend circle is not good. As school admission and society selection are both parent’s mutual decision, then how can we question female if their child is misleading? Solution to tackle these issue also must be decided by both parents. For instance, they do check the school history before admitting their child, do spend healthy time with their child after office hours and on weekends, do keep watchful eyes on their child's friend circle.
To sum up, in the near future both parents will work to have standard life. Therefore, if a child is facing any issue, both parents would be responsible, not just the working women. As both parent's earning is the need of the hours, the care towards their child must also be divided equally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90032154341 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44849763372 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559485530547 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4584859377 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.6 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212369527231 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736002657547 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437473686454 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138890101012 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442600702746 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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