The bar charts compare the information about how developed and undeveloped countries were promoting to make contribution in main criterias, named education and science over 2 years.
Overall, it is palpable that industrialized countries had largest spending on distinct areas in comparison with undeveloped nationalities.
Discerning the bar graph, in industrialized countries, the people had spend approximately average 10 years in school, especially in 1980 and 1990, whereas the people who related to developing nationalities were only spend average 2.5 years in school during 1980 that were moderately augmented and reached upto average 3.5 years.
Analysing further, in developed countries, scientists and technicians were consecutively 70 per thousand in 1990 which were 2 times more than the amount of 1980.Followed by, undeveloped countries in which scientists and technicians were only 5 and 19 in 1980 and 1990.Eventually, developed countries spent more on research and development which were 150 and 350 per billion dollars in 2 years, but the spending of undeveloped countries lied upto 50 per billion dollars.
- The table below shows the hours of leisure time spent by people in different age groups in Someland.Link : https://www.ielts-exam.net/academic_writing_samples_task_1/104/This is an IELTS Task 1 -please help me correct it . 56
- The diagram below shows how rainwater is reused Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 60
- A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.Dis 67
- The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- The maps below show the changes that have been taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the largest'.
Suggestion: had the largest
... palpable that industrialized countries had largest spending on distinct areas in compariso...
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Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...parison with undeveloped nationalities. Discerning the bar graph, in industriali...
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Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...ndustrialized countries, the people had spend approximately average 10 years in schoo...
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Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...ndustrialized countries, the people had spend approximately average 10 years in schoo...
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Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Followed
...re 2 times more than the amount of 1980.Followed by, undeveloped countries in which scie...
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Line 7, column 269, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Eventually
...ans were only 5 and 19 in 1980 and 1990.Eventually, developed countries spent more on rese...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7380952381 4.92477711251 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35528486241 2.65546596893 126% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589285714286 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.370625526 43.030603864 303% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 241.0 112.824112599 214% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.0 22.9334400587 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244143713893 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140436997441 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428401804109 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140436997441 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428401804109 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.6 13.2329268293 201% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.39 61.2550243902 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.51609756098 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 10.3012195122 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.9 11.4140731707 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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