In this era where life is very busy and competative in all fields of life, it is very difficult to get some leisure time. It is crucial to get break from studies and different projects. there are two schools of thought for use of this spare time. some people think it is best to use this time for reading and doing mental exercises while some insist to use this time for other relaxing activities like physical exercises and listening music. this essay will explore both views with a definate opinion.
firstly, people who are in favor of reading books and solving mental puzzles suggest that these mental activities broaden someone,s mind and knowledge. it is seen that in advanced countries like china and America reading stories and mental exercises are started in early school. these are good to build confidence and brain power. so they think that these are best practices for leisure time.
on the other hand some people think that someone,s brain need some break . so best use of spare time to do something different like listening music or doing some physical games. like our brain our eyes need some rest too. therefore it is better to relax in spare time and listen music. constant sitting for reading is not good for health too. different sports are good for mental and physical health.
in my opinion it is best to use leisure time for sports and listening music. it is soothing for brain and more productive. in developed countries it is seen that every university and every workplace has proper gym. people spend their breaks either in gym or some enjoying walking on road tracks. these effect on productivity of a country.in the same way i remember that when i was in university the best student from our class was a best singer in the town. so in my opinion it is good to spend extra time for other activities like physical games and mind relaxing techniques like listening music, watching movies.
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