Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Since the beginning of recorded time, it is seen that different ages have different impacts on someone,s life. Life has different phases with different perceptions . On the one hand, many people believe that young age like teenage is the most enjoyable time of life. on the other, some people correlate adult age to the best part of life. In this essay both arguments will be analyzed before coming to a reasoned conclusion.
It is felt by many that teen age is the best part of life. It is the time when someone has full energy and a positive attitude to all adventures of life. There is no pressure of responsibility.This is the best time to enjoy friendship, music, sports, and movies. That is the reason many people are able to create new ideas. For instance , many famous singer like Justin Beber , made amazing music albums at a very young age. This example shows clearly that young age is the best part of life. It is easy to see why this argument got a lot of support.
At the same time some people believe that adult age is the golden age of life. According to their views that someone enjoy life when he/ she is more mature. In adult life it is more relaxed and smooth to make decisions . For example, travelling is more enjoyable in mature age. It is easy to enjoy life when someone is economically stable. Thus, it is seen that it is easy to enjoy when you are more mature and financially strong.
After analyzing both points of views, it is believed that young age is the best time of life. Teen age is care free age. Most responsibilities are on parents. It is best to enjoy this part of life. But it is recommended that make a best use of this part of life.It is the best time to make a good personality .
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but, if, so, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45425867508 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48834325731 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451104100946 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9241871268 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.3913043478 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.7826086957 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91304347826 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170743383699 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622756112372 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05684079491 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121229177333 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493220319391 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 13.0946893788 49% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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