many young people spend their time in shopping centers. This has a negative effect on the youth. to what extent you agree or disagree.
It has been noticed recently that shopping malls and markets are more crowded with teenagers than adults. In some people,s opinion this is causing bad impact on these youngsters. I strongly favor this view. This essay will elaborate my opinion with some examples.
Firstly, It has been observed that mostly young children are seen in the shopping areas around their school time. This way sometimes they miss their classes. This can effect their education . At this young age it is very challenging for them to recognize long term effects of this carelessness. For a good carrier it is very important to focus on their goal at this crucial time. For example students in private schools are not allowed to leave their school in lunch time. In general it is seen that outcome of these disciplined school is much better then public school.In my opinion kids should use this time more for playing and entertainment rather then going for malls.
Secondly, it is important to save money for education. There is a lot of distraction with expensive brands in markets. Sometime it can cause peer pressure on youngsters. Some people can not afford expensive cloths and shoes. It is effecting someone,s personality too.Some people try to get money by illegal ways. It would be nice to stay simple and spend more time in studying and building good carrier.
In my opinion, It is important that youth should spend more time for their education and carrier at this time. It is easy to do online shopping now a days too. this way they have more options to buy their stuff with saving time and energy. Recently there are many websites offering free shipping. So it is the best way of saving time and energy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in general, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79794520548 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43781111641 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551369863014 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.679424277 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.6818181818 106.682146367 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.2727272727 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264821570141 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785148416791 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592726540465 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149997239339 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656168025538 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.67 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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