many young people spend their time in shopping centers. This has a negative effect on the youth. to what extent you agree or disagree.
These days, most of young people are prefering to spend their lesure time in the big shopping center and mall. this trend has some negetive impect on youths and society. I disagree with this statment becouse it has some positive impect on both people and culture. This essay will discuss both side of the argument.
On the one hand,this trend has positive benifit of young people. The first and formost reason is that getting information. For example, when they went to shopping mall they awer about some digital gedgets such as laptop, phone and camera, which is helpfull in their future.Incresing economy is the second reason for the society. To eloborate, young people spend most of time in shopping mall. As a result, it boost economy own to sales is incresed.
On the other hand,there are some advers effect of this trand. Firstly, it is waste of natural resources. To illustrate, sometime they spend huge amount of money in unnecessary thing, which is totally demaged such kind of valuable resources like fule and energy, which was used in the manufacturing in the product. Moreover, young student are spend their precious time in shopping. consequently, they do not focus in their study, which is directly impact on their accademic grade and also in the future of society.
To conclude, spending lot of time in shopping center creats some negetive impact on society as well as youth like waste of resource and academic grade. However, I believe that this trend has some positive outcome like gaining information and growing of economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, for example, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00772200772 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53107577297 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544401544402 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.8573765245 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0625 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295909240906 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968822994045 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093284852597 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180484958083 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634986530519 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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