Successful sports professional can earn a great deal more money than people in other importantprofessions. some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both and give your own opinion.
For the development of a country it is very crucial that it should compete all latest and demanding fields of life. sports for progress are as beneficial as technology, science and medicine. as its a big deal , sportsman are an important figure too. some people think that they are earning more money compared to other professions while others believe that players deserve for that. this essay will ellaborate both concepts with ultimate opinion.
For the group of people who believe that it is reasonable for sportsmen to earn good money ,there are some logical reasons. firstly, players work hard for their games and devote lots of their personal time while staying away from thier families. this is reasonable to get good reward for this longer time. Secondly, players usually have short carrier for their jobs. It is better for them to have handsome savings for their future life. so it is good for players to earn enough with more income.
On the other hand some people believe that it is unfair that other important jobs are not highly paid compared to sports. One of big concern by them is that youngsters are more convinced with sportsman life and income. As a result everybody will try to go in sports and there will be imbalance for other jobs. Secondly, playesr are awarded extra for their victories so they do not need monthly high income. so it is fair that players should get compettable income with other important fields of life.
In my opinion it is important that money should be distributed evenly for all jobs. Extra bonuses for extra work is reasonable but it is is good for economy of a country that every field of life gets its importance and growth equally.this is better for progress of any country.
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sportsman are an important figure too.
sportsman is an important figure too.
One of big concern
One of big concerns
this essay will ellaborate both concepts with ultimate opinion.
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staying away from thier families. this is reasonable to get good reward for this longer time.
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Sentence: Secondly, playesr are awarded extra for their victories so they do not need monthly high income. so it is fair that players should get compettable income with other important fields of life.
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Error: compettable Suggestion: computable
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