Some people believe that development of business results in a loss of cultural ties between countries. Other people contradict this belief. Give your opinion.
Many individuals think that when business boosts, this can lead to deterioration in the cultural relationships among nations. I totally disagree with this notion, and in this essay I discuss my reasons.
Firstly, by the expansion of business and setting up new international firms, people tend to travel to other countries to work at one of the branches of a company. This will inevitably result in people exchanging their culture with others in different countries. For instance, they may exchange each other's cousins, learn about others' customs and traditions, and visit museums to learn about history and heritage of that country. Moreover, they may tend to learn each other's languages to facilitate their communication. All these factors can fasten the relationships between people in different countries. Alternatively, if there had not been such international firms, people would not have traveled to work abroad, and would not have had such cultural experiences.
Secondly, business not only has the ability to improve the relationships among people, but also does the same on the level of governments. Having said that global companies create job opportunities and boost the economy of countries, governments usually promote setting up such businesses to gain benefits from them. This, in turn, would lead to better relationships among governments of these companies, and because they would have common preferences, they might overlook any political conflicts that may hinder their benefits.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that global businesses can significantly boost relationships among countries as it can enhance connections among people as well as governments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59375 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07815474288 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7222961976 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.333333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228848261378 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914034744888 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717962431217 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126390879616 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643295271342 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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