Nowadays with the help of technology, the agriculture field has certainly progressed drastically. However, there are still some countries which face scarcity of the food on a regular basis. This essay will examine the cause and solution to this issue.
For instance, even though the production of food has increased, but it is still out off reach to the people because of increased tax and tariffs on export and import of the food. Hence the prices of food items like grains, dairy products, and poultry are very expensive. Secondly, transportation is still an issue, several places are not well connected, further transportation to these places not possible due to bad roads, and poor weather conditions. In addition, in developed countries the food wastage is huge. People waste food on a regular basis because their country is rich so they can afford the majority of food while underdeveloped countries are yet struggling to feed their people.
To overcome this issue, governments of the countries can take some steps, for example, food should be exempted from the tax and tariffs, so people can easily afford it. Additionally, as the population of the world is increasing tremendously, the production of genetically modified crops which are high yielding and resilient should be encouraged. Furthermore, governments should invest money to develop proper channels for export and import of food items. In addition to this, people in developed countries should be mindful of food wastage, instead of dumping groceries into the bin, they should donate food or money to the people in need.
In conclusion, world hunger has been an issue for a long time. With the help of leading countries and individuals, the issue can be resolved to some extent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...riffs on export and import of the food. Hence the prices of food items like grains, d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08461538462 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71311737991 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561538461538 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2423615072 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.692307692 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135784139551 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510795076926 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052446305673 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898770864899 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03110990941 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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