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with the rise in the use of internet facilities result in the generation of several problems in our society discuss the problems and solutions
To begin with, internet is the important part of our life but the over use of internet causes many problem in our society. children spent the all time on internet to playing games, watching movies and videos, listening songs etc they would not serious about their study they compromise with their future as well as they easy access the adult sites that creates mental and the physical problems. the rise in the internet facilities also increases the hacking problem. For example the american F16 data is hacked by the soviet union. hackers stolen the data of large companies through internet.
To begin with, internet is the important part of our life but the over use of internet causes many problem in our society. children spent the all time on internet to playing games, watching movies and videos, listening songs etc they would not serious about their study they compromise with their future as well as they easy access the adult sites that creates mental and the physical problems. the rise in the internet facilities also increases the hacking problem. for example the american F16 data is hacked by the soviet union. hackers stolen the data of large companies through internet.
on the other hand, there are many solution to protect the society from these problems. the important solution is make advance cyber security that protect our data from the hackers. secondly parents should aware about the wrong uses of the
internet and they also look their children activities. an parents should not give mobile phones to their small children. some adult websites should be banned by government as well as the data limit also set according to the age of children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ife but the over use of internet causes many problem in our society. children spent the all ...
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...net causes many problem in our society. children spent the all time on internet to playi...
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...g movies and videos, listening songs etc they would not serious about their study...
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...F16 data is hacked by the soviet union. hackers stolen the data of large companies thro...
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...of large companies through internet. on the other hand, there are many solution...
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... solution is make advance cyber security that protect our data from the hackers. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, for example, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 305.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97704918033 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29579380062 2.71678728327 85% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.386885245902 0.580463131201 67% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.7637447658 50.4703680194 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.25397266985 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.33497536946 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 2.75862068966 362% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0152511707676 0.242375264174 6% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00722010402794 0.0925447433944 8% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270151555694 0.071462118173 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0126536504468 0.151781067708 8% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253073008935 0.0609392437508 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.94827586207 181% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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