The demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer and how electricity is used in an average English home
The line graph gives information about the comparison of electricity demand during typical days in winter and summer in England the pie chart also provides the percentage of electricity used in an average English home. Overall, as can be seen that the highest electricity demand during winter had to be in 21.00-23.00 approximately whilst in the summer the highest demand was around 12.00-14.00. The electricity was mostly used for heating rooms and heating water clearly which measured in percentage.
Regarding to the first chart initially, the most positive movement electricity consumption during winter happened to be around 21.00-23.00 which reached up to 49.000 watt nearly whilst the smallest demand was at 06.00-09.00 which got down to 31.000 watt generally. On the other season, in summer, the highest electricity required had to be at around 12.00-15.00 which raised up to 20.000 watt closely and it was almost similar with the demand at 21.00-23.00. Reversely, the lowest demand of electricity during summer was at 06.00 and similarly at 16.00-17.00 which counted around 15.000 watt.
Looking to the second chart, room and water heater occurred to be the most electricity used for which peaked up to 52,5%. Then, the next highest electricity consumed was in the usage of oven, kettles, and washing machines which marked at 17,5%. Slightly lower than former, the electricity usage of lighting, tv, radio, vacuum cleaners, food mixers and electronic tools were similar which noted at 15% respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "required had" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'had' or 'to be had'.
Suggestion: had; to be had
...ummer, the highest electricity required had to be at around 12.00-15.00 which raise...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, regarding, second, similarly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35146443515 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79855957868 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539748953975 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3418411082 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.111111111 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5555555556 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29466773007 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158335623945 0.103423049105 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153781019275 0.0843802449381 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239456934267 0.15604864568 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167519011284 0.0819641961636 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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