The chart gives information about the amount of viewers to seven art galleries in France, USA, UK, Korea, Spain and Russia in 2011, unit in millions.
In general, it can be seen that Louvre in France was the most popular compared to other groups.
France had slightly below 9 million people visiting to Louvre in 2011. It was three times higher than Russia, with nearly 3 million people went to Sate Hermitage. There was round 6 million viewers to Metropolitan Museum in USA, while the art gallery in Spain only attracted half of people to Museo del Prado in 2011 (with roughly 3 million people).
The quantity of people went to British Museum was nearly as high as Museum in USA, with just below 6 million people. In contract, National Museum of Korea had viewers similar to Museum in Spain and Russia, with just above 3 millions people.
- the flow chart shows trampling the negative effect of tourist walking in the countryside for the environment 70
- The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. 78
- In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can you suggest? 61
- The bar charts below show the Marriage and Divorce Statistics for eight countries in 1981 and 1994.Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.Write at least 150 words. 67
- In school and universities, girls tend to choose art while boys like science. What are the reasons for this trend and do you think this tendency should be changed? 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 694.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68918918919 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27545257942 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560810810811 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4095571095 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1428571429 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0898536096841 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474811593117 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593987881956 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0609886794398 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633781005354 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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