Some people think that the public libraries are no longer important while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?
Nowadays, with the growth of technology it is often argued by some people that government fund libraries are not of much use these days, while others are of the opine that it still plays an important role The thought process of this essay will discuss both the views and opinion will be stated in the conclusion.
To begin with, it is true that internet has made state run libraries less important. The first one is that online sources can store a lot more information than any physical library. This allows researchers to easily get information without travelling to a local library. In other words, we can say that finding information online is a whole lot easier than going to a library and reading voluminous books. Moreover, students can look for information on the internet whenever they want, while most libraries can only be visited during certain hours of the day. As a result, finding information online is easier for people who are busy with their work during daytime.
On the other hand, public libraries still serve some valuable purpose. To start with, the information on the internet is relatively new whereas libraries have an impressive collection of old manuscripts that are not available online. Also, much of the information online is in English whereas libraries have a huge collection of books written in a wide variety of languages. Furthermore, Libraries usually provide a quiet space for reading or learning. This will greatly benefit students who are learning or researching since they are less likely to be distracted by people or things around them. For example, many university students claim that they can only concentrate when they are in a quiet study area in their university library.
In conclusion, I believe both arguments are relevant. On balance, in my opinion It is a fact that traditional libraries have lost some of their importance because of the advancement in technology. Even so they are still needed because information stored in a library is always reliable and accurate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, look, moreover, so, still, whereas, while, even so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, it is true, to begin with, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05970149254 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75133212637 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540298507463 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8629847139 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.9375 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0625 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190269903021 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619827305072 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678842229185 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136044456984 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674535620102 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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