Task 2: Some people think sending criminals to prison is not an effective way to deal with them. Education and training are better for them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that Governments should not force criminals to serve prison sentences due to the its ineffectiveness, but
rather be softer on crimes by applying education and training. Personally, I partly agree with this perspective.
On the one hand, there are reasons explaining why some people support the idea of using educational environment and
training on deterring criminals. First, in terms of involuntary crimes, long prison sentences would seem too ruthless
and not socially widely accepted. Because the crimes, normally the law-abiding ones, might have committed the crimes not
on purposes, such as for self-defense or feeding their family when it comes to robbery, not for their own profit. That
is why non-custodial verdicts such as community service orders, vocational education and probation orders would be
handed out and act as a deterrent in these cases. Second, for serious crimes, even homicide, it would be a waste on
sending them to prison if they were not fully and properly educated to change their nature from a criminal into a good
human. Moreover, through education and training, the officials may gain more insights into the motive of criminal
offenses, and thus to come up with more congruous solution to reduce crime rate.
However, as far as I have concerned, to culminate the effectiveness of dealing with crimes, governments should not
rank in education and training. Instead, using this solution with rigorous supervision on crimes could be more
practical. As I mentioned above, notorious crimes with unethical behavior basically need much time to change for the
better. It means in the early stage of using education and training, there is a high possibility they could return to crime
again, and may negatively affect their counterparts. In addition, in terms of cases that are too heinous and dangerous, the
full weight of the law and the policy of zero-tolerance must be imposed to make sure social security.
In conclusion, governments should ponder using alternative ways to penalize offenses but in a way of flexibility. It means
the leaders should combine education and training with strict policy before granting a certain summary judgement
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, thus, as for, in addition, in conclusion, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45584045584 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89698063752 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581196581197 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.100605822 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21229061612 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665960725907 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429118927718 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0576087759709 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420427307256 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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