Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Education, nowadays, is an essential part of an individual's life. It is argued that financial study should be included in the school courses as a compulsory subject. I hold an opposite view on this because some of the students are interested in artistic activities, and the syllabus already contains so many other subjects to learn.
Firstly, many pupils have natural talents such as dancing, singing, and some of them interested in art subjects; however, the financial study might be boring for them. If they will try to study this forcefully, then they have to focus on this subject more than others, and consequently, they do not get time to improve their qualities, which they already have. Moreover, they never succeed in their life by studying commercial subjects along with others. For instance, many eminent personalities, who succeeded in their life by using their talent, art, not by financial study even some of them are not well educated.
Secondly, in this contemporary era, there are a lot of syllabi to study, owing to this children are not get time for leisure activities. Therefore, they get depressed and suffer from the problem of depression at a very young age. and their childhood time ruined in the burden of this type of heavy subjects. For instance, so many cases are registered nowadays that the students are failed in their examinations and admitted to suicide, and in very young age they have been taken concealing from the psychiatrist to rid from depression due to anxiety for their syllabus.
In conclusion, while some individuals believe financial education should be taught in schools as a compulsory subject, owing to this financial study will be boring for some pupils and syllabus have many subject to study, I do not accord with the above notion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, even so, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02693602694 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73399014773 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535353535354 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5810943249 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.416666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146593071687 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613652407675 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716690110948 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113354595814 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767240107729 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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