"Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Recently some students need to arrive school at the early time in the morning. Some people think that starting school day early is a good approach to support learning, while other people think that starting school day at the later time is a good approach to support learning."
In the light of the development of people’s life quality, the increasing number of people tend to pay their attention to the education. There is a controversial question that should students start their classes in the early of morning or at the later time. Some people believes that starting school earlier is better, while others hold the opposite opinion. From my perspective, the first option is more reasonable.
To begin with, getting up early can offer a favorable body condition for students to learning. Generally speaking, in order to weak up as early as possible at morning, people need to sleep early at night before. As a result, by maintaining this kind of working and sleeping hours for a long term can help people develop a healthy lifestyle and biological clocks. With the helping like this, people’s body status at everyday morning can allow them finish some study tasks such as some assignments or academic articles more effective. My brother Robb’s experience is a good example to illustrate this. His school asks all students to arrive at school at 7am each day and set a morning individual study for them. At that time, Robb can adjust his condition in order to face on the upcoming study tasks by reading and reviewing their textbook as a preparation for the first class. Undoubtedly, this is very helpful for his study, and the result is very good. He not only has the habit of getting up early, but also has achieved good score in the final exam at each semester.
Additionally, people can be more efficient at the early time of a day. In most case, can finish more works and have a better memory at the early time of morning. According to a research conducted by the Medicine department of Stanford University at 2017, the peak of brain’s working ability usually at 7-9am each day. At that time, because of a special chemical material started to be produced, people will be more likely to solve some difficult problems or memories some complex knowledge. In the other word, the production of some hormones in brain enables people to be more efficient in working and studying. It further explains why schools should requires students to get to school and start to study earlier.
Admittedly, starting school day at the later time do have some advantages such as providing a security insurance for students or giving them more free time at morning. However, arriving at school later means that the class will over later. Also, the assignments and courses of school will not become less just because of the delay of starting time, which means students have to stay up late in order to finish their homework. It will have some negative effects on their body and mentality such as being insomnia or depressed. Consequently, the effects and efficiency of students will be declined greatly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... a morning individual study for them. At that time, Robb can adjust his condition...
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'require'
Suggestion: require
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, while, kind of, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2360.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 480.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91666666667 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67158075865 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502083333333 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 732.6 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1568173245 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360745065288 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109437358517 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731773039739 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237706738074 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262667804844 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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