Some employers for their employees subsidized membership of gyms and sports clubs, believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so. Consider the arguments from both aspects of this possible debate, and reach a conclusion.
Numerous owners of the organizations prefer to provide in fee concession in membership of gyms and sports clubs to their employees to consider that this step will improve the fitness level of worker and benefit the organization. Although, others do not agree and believe that there is no profit in doing such activities. Before reaching a conclusion, it is important to discuss both aspects of this argument.
On the one side, sports and exercise on daily routine help the person to remain fit and healthy. Good health of an employee benefits the organization by the active participation of worker in different tasks. More importantly, the healthiness of an employee involves less stress in work and more happiness with the job. Consequently, an employee stays with the organization for longer duration and gained experience can be easily utilized while making important decisions in the business. Hence, I believe that providing financial support in access to sports and gymnasium are quite beneficial for the company.
Conversely, other organizations find such activities as a waste of money and unproductive for the organization, as there is no measuring system of such benefits provided to the employees. Therefore, these managements prefer to provide target based profits such as bonuses and other perks to their employee which can easily be traced.
To conclude, while, the precise computation is difficult in such ideas, healthy and active workers are always beneficial for the organization and they prefer to work with an organization for a longer duration. Therefore, I believe that this culture of providing support in sports and gyms activities should be encouraged in all organizations to minimize the chance of errors from staff.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, hence, if, so, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02312031827 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554347826087 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.488349795 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.666666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256922576894 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941154538205 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482188247179 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163432447987 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811403163094 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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