Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
Thank you for your letter yesterday, I was very saddened about what happened. As I know how annoyingly you experienced in recent days, I am writing this letter to apologize for such the noise released from my house.
Indeed, my son has started playing the saxophone for a week, and he is really fond of this instrument; therefore, he has immersed himself into practicing in all days and nights. I extremely embarrassed because my son has aroused you so much disturbance.
I deeply regret it ever having happened at all, and I am willing to do whatever it takes to correct the situation. I will control my child’s timetable for practicing which ensures not interrupt the rest hour of the neighbors. Moreover, I am going to build the soundproof wall in my child’s room to prevent the troublesome noise flowing in our neighborhood.
I would like to express my sincere apologies once again.
Yours faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/ Madam, Thank you for your letter yesterday, I w...
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Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ever it takes to correct the situation. I will control my child's timetable ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, really, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04430379747 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97320862977 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.70253164557 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1343672949 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.625 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211148349489 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951632074997 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957564195319 0.0603063233224 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100697535558 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117903788461 0.0580467560999 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.