Nowadays a lot of people are throwing away the objects that can work properly in order to update them with the new ones, However it is causing environmental problems. How far do you agree?
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As it is mentioned above people like to be an update in thier staf and change them by the new one. this behavior has two reason, technology and marheting. the first one is intresting but its not attractive than other one. marketing expert try to show new machines, device, etc more than real one and adsorb people to them. they make kind of addiction in the people and force them to buy that device. however being update is a good idea and we should do that.
on the other hand, this kind of method is harmful for environment and earth. we should be careful about which one of the things we choose and try to find environment">environmental friendly one of them. Also non of them are not compatible with the environment copmletly
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, so, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70873786408 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.5097322375 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563106796117 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1148726104 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6153846154 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105040719441 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458976924779 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460059977609 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773590523968 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530913106682 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.