Experts say if the old people spend time and get along with others and excercise everyday will be healthier and happier .However many ealderly are suffering from lonelyness and lack of fitness. Discuss the cause and solution
having a healthy body is important for all people specifically older people. Scientist believes that if old person do practice every day for a while they feel healthy and strong. besides of that they feel happy when they do exercise. but they have some problem which should be solved.
when you reach to the age 60-year-old your body can't fix itself and you should help to this process. Hence you must do some excercise to tell your body I'm young yet and I can fix myself. so your body start make some materials which are need for your body. may be an important thing for your body is adrenalin. when you do some sport your body penetrate this chemical material to your blood. Therefore this product send to your muscle and you fix it. besides of that you feel happy when your body penetrate that to your vessels.
doing entertainment for old people is difficult but they should do that by the plan. so they must do that by advice of some doctors. they shouldn't do sport whiteout doctors advice, because this kind of sport may be dangerous for them and make themselves injure.
overall, doing sport is important for all people and whiteout that people feel sick and in the future they find out they have different kind of disease like kclostrol, diabetes, etc. on that moment they can't stop that kind of disease and they should live with that. may be do excercise at least for 15 minutes a day is necessary and we should do it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, may, so, therefore, while, at least, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54826254826 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24618856478 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486486486486 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.0 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0977098214 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.2941176471 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2352941176 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0503945344978 0.244688304435 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0220251221481 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0185826719847 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0389230659931 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0142104075125 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.0946893788 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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