International sporting events could contribute greatly to peace and stability in the world. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
now a day governments try to use different method for make peace in their countries like national celebration, international sporting events, etc... . so a lot of parameter help government to do this. in this manuscript we will discuss about internationl events and effect of that on internal peace between people and group with different idea.
As it is mentioned above, politician have various scenario to make a peace in their countries. international event is the best one. this event is kind of war between countries that has good result for them. the first one, make the people close to each other and society do one thing for thier countires. on the other hand goverments show each other thir soft power and intlegents. they said to each other if other country attach to me, my people work together to win in that war. so you cant successful in this figth and you should forgot that.
I believe international sport event could make balance between the power of the world, and remind to the people of each country, they live in the one society and if they want have better country they should work together and forgot their conflicts. this event remind people they must work like a part of the body and if one section dont work correctly, they cant improve themselve.
In conclusion, all people like sport events and they fill good when they watch that and its help them to be close to each other and be friend together. Hence in my opinion this method is good and valuable.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72692307692 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48545924734 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526923076923 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0617560701 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7857142857 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141568295759 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565413005473 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395886746556 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914035113576 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240686457794 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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