History is the root of the headlessness of all things on this planet.it provieds us a source of information about ancient cultures, special event of human society for decades and helps us know more about ancestor's life .This is what some people think, but there is still a source of conflicting thinking that we cannot learn anything from our past to live our lives today.And now we will discuss this issue
The thoughts that we cannot learn anything from the past are the wrong thinking of most people.There must be a past to have the present so there must be tripping to succeed .How can we have this success?.From the experiences we learned after stumbling blocks.Besind learning from our own past, we can also learn many things from the past of others, especially those who went first such as enrichment tips, life experiences to apply to our present life
How about the benefit we can get from history?we can know that ancestor of human is ancient gibbon,wars between cultures,counties,continets.andthe most famous war is world war which were caused many casualties for all humanity. It will be useful for archaeologists because they need this information to do their job.For the rest of the world, history may be not so important since we don't use on history too much in our life
on the other hand ,the reason why people don't like this subject because it's too long and hard to remember.Reading history takes too much time so we will not have time for other activities. While in that period we can study subjects such as math, physics, chemistry , English which are useful for your future job
in short,I do not find this subject interesting, so I think we just need to learn a brief study of history to reduce the stress for students in exams.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, still, while, i think, in short, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77631578947 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08056473147 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546052631579 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 101.0 20.2975951904 498% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 362.861773499 49.4020404114 735% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 484.0 106.682146367 454% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 101.333333333 20.7667163134 488% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.0 7.06120827912 425% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325800881672 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185158185351 0.084324248473 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112236564185 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17246903587 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906838813229 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 51.7 13.0946893788 395% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -14.12 50.2224549098 -28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 40.3 11.3001002004 357% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.63 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.45 8.58950901804 133% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 52.0 9.78957915832 531% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 42.4 10.1190380762 419% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 52.0 10.7795591182 482% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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