Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay insurance in your car each month. You are not happy about this. Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain.
Why you are writing to them
Why do you think the insurance should not be increased
What do you want them to do
Dear Sir,
My name is Yogesh Kumar and I am one of your old customers having I taken car insurance from your company. The insured car was an economy model, and I availed insurance from 23rd April 2016 to the present. Recently, I come to know about the increase in insurance amount, and I am exceedingly displeased with your decision. I would like to <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-531C15DC6BDF1E145E428A3FCA7EBCF1" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_3087" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: start, begin" data-pwa-suggestions="start~begin" data-pwa-dictionary-word="commence" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">commence</pwa> your company on their professionalism and service offered, and hope you will understand my concern with these qualities.
I bought the car in 2016, and since then we have always chosen your organization as our insurance partner. The vehicle is still in branded condition, and no claim availed till now. Payments paid on time and no delay ever happened; <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-F36C5F353BD011E925EE0FF8E8F69BC8" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_814" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="moreover, " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">moreover,</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-361D61457F66BBB88D5AF340D73F65C5" data-pwa-rule-id="WHITESPACE" data-pwa-category="" data-pwa-hint="The punctuation mark '.' may not require a space before it. Consider removing the space." data-pwa-suggestions="." data-pwa-dictionary-word=" ." class="pwa-mark-done"><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-0A336B76950A0678F7BF5A370392918B" data-pwa-rule-id="WHITESPACE" data-pwa-category="" data-pwa-hint="The punctuation mark '.' may not require a space before it. Consider removing the space." data-pwa-suggestions="." data-pwa-dictionary-word=" ." class=""><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-F36C5F353BD011E925EE0FF8E8F69BC8" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_814" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="moreover, " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> </pwa>provided feedback</pwa></pwa>. I called your customer care to know the reason; however, no communication received since.
I would like to request that a flexible policy <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-F53C271944FAF324209F2B10972A2BAA" data-pwa-rule-id="null" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-dictionary-word="be referred" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">be referred</pwa> for new vehicles, and for loyal customers. I hope you will consider it favourably and will take some action promptly.
I look forward to hearing <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-8183A88DC1361BF98E7C013ED4A5F8E6" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_366" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="back " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">back </pwa>from you immediately.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,  
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Line 5, column 595, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...os;pwa-mark pwa-mark-done'>moreover,
Line 5, column 779, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...data-pwa-hint='The punctuation mark . may not require a space before it. Cons...
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Line 5, column 782, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: May
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Line 5, column 918, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...;.' data-pwa-dictionary-word=' .' class='pwa-mark-done'><...> ^^
Line 5, column 1136, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...data-pwa-hint='The punctuation mark . may not require a space before it. Cons...
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Line 5, column 1139, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: May
...a-pwa-hint='The punctuation mark . may not require a space before it. Consider...
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Line 5, column 1603, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,  
... data-pwa-dictionary-word='moreover, ' class='pwa-mark pwa-mark-do...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, may, moreover, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3300.0 937.175257732 352% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 299.0 206.0 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 11.0367892977 4.54256449028 243% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 13.6540768343 2.54303337028 537% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 182.0 127.690721649 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 899.1 290.88556701 309% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 3.0 1.41237113402 212% => Avg_syllables_per_word is high.
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.463917525773 1293% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 184.165516588 44.8134815571 411% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 206.25 76.5299724578 270% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 18.6875 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8125 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0421693256103 0.216113520407 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653919254265 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084522840025 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0531991447149 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055171863834 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.9 8.37731958763 476% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -65.23 70.7449484536 -92% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 3.82989690722 381% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.8 7.45979381443 359% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 46.75 8.71597938144 536% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 41.2886597938 230% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 8.62886597938 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.