You work a part-time job in a company and the company posted an advert seeking a person for a full-time position. Write a letter to your manager requesting to apply for the advertised position. In your letter say
– Why do you want to apply?
– What are your future goals?
– Why would it be beneficial for the company?
Dear Sir,
my name is Yogesh Kumar and work as a part-time employee in your company. I am writing <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-832D7D6BC7FDA6E55556E2F60A245DB1" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_603" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: regarding" data-pwa-suggestions="regarding" data-pwa-dictionary-word="in reference to" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">in reference to</pwa> the advertisement you placed on the noticed board for full-time employment as a waiter.
I have held several positions in the catering department during my job and, as the company is looking for a full-time employee, I am very keen to join as soon as possible. I have completed and passed advanced certification in the food and have been working in the organization for the last 3 years; I am, therefore, familiar with the requirements of working in the food industry. I look forward to seeing me as a food inspector and your favourable decision could canvas it for me.
I am very reliable and trustworthy, have a friendly, outgoing personality and enjoy dealing with the public. My current manager is happy to provide a reference and I am available for the interview <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-AF288B704F76FDFA3A1810AA3B09CDCC" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_572" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="at any time " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">at any time </pwa>except on Sunday afternoon when I attend the religious ceremony.
Please <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-DB277D3257F0E38F531B3790CA9CC351" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_354" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="do not hesitate to " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">do not hesitate to </pwa>call me.
Yours faithfully,
<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-B49A3159DFA10C54089D218A8693330E" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: yogesh" data-pwa-suggestions="she~August~fish~goes~gas" data-pwa-dictionary-word="yogesh" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">yogesh</pwa> <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-14818C9ACAACCAEFF557CEE3FCB2E4DA" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: kumar" data-pwa-suggestions="Kumar~kumara" data-pwa-dictionary-word="kumar" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">kumar</pwa>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, my name is Yogesh Kumar and work as a pa...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... very keen to join as soon as possible. I have completed and passed advanced cert...
^
Line 5, column 381, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ements of working in the food industry. I look forward to seeing me as a food ins...
^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ble decision could canvas it for me. I am very reliable and trustworthy, have ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2567.0 937.175257732 274% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 10.3927125506 4.54256449028 229% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 13.1081188675 2.54303337028 515% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607287449393 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 290.88556701 244% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.9 1.41237113402 205% => Avg_syllables_per_word is high.
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 212.831063824 44.8134815571 475% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 285.222222222 76.5299724578 373% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 27.4444444444 16.8248392259 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0371427959832 0.216113520407 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571739812877 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503031773042 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0489800904738 0.12726935374 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053995632569 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.2 8.37731958763 492% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -65.91 70.7449484536 -93% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 3.82989690722 415% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.2 7.45979381443 391% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 43.28 8.71597938144 497% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.47 7.59969072165 138% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 41.2886597938 208% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 8.62886597938 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 8.15463917526 196% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.