You work a part-time job in a company and the company posted an advert seeking a person for a full-time position. Write a letter to your manager requesting to apply for the advertised position. In your letter say– Why do you want to apply?– What are y

Dear Mr. Anand,

I am writing this letter to express my interest in the position of a full-time software engineer which has been advertised by our company.

When I joined this company I was persuing my masters and therefore, I did not have time to work as a full-time employee so I joined as a casual worker; However, last month I completed my degree and now I can work full-time.

In the last one year, I have learned many new skills regarding the field of information technology and therefore I want to use my learning by working full-time in potential projects of our company.

It is not only beneficial for me to work as a permanent employee, but company will also get a resource who has required knowledge about the internal work of the organization. Kindly let me know if you need any information or would you like to interview me.

I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest as per your convenience.

Yours sincerely,
Sukhraj Singh

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, regarding, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77710843373 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84960135801 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680722891566 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.283369761 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.285714286 76.5299724578 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25732930296 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101690680598 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266514325526 0.0603063233224 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107713749956 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028797362228 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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