Leisure is a growing industry, but people no longer entertain themselves as much as they used to because the use of modern technology has made them less creative.
Leisure is a pivotal part of an individual’s life in order to maintain balance from work and fun and due to the advancement of technology, it became a hindrance for people to enjoy it creatively. So, some insist that the public were happier in the past when life was still simple that they manage to savor their free time with worthwhile events. In my part, I disagree with the statement because the generation today became resourceful and artistic during their leisure time with the help of the latest technology.
In the past, children were just playing outside the house and watch limited number of programs in the television during their free time, this kind of activities lead them to become stagnant since their ability to learn something new do not have enough resources. However, at present although children can still play outside, their horizon broaden because there are various activities they can choose from since people keep on thinking new ideas to generate fun-filled activities in order for them to experience a new version of leisure. For instance, there are different types of educational games that can be downloaded for free in the mobile phones. In this way, children and adults can have fun while learning with the use of gadgets. Moreover, with the additional programs on television today, people have more options to discover and explore different phenomena just by watching on the screen at home.
In addition, people in the past had difficulty to earn extra money due to the scarcity of available options and leisure activities that was famous decades ago were just chatting with neighbors or simply do nothing. However, today, due to modern technology, people become resourceful and use their gadgets to earn extra cash. For instance, other housewives sell some items online while taking care of their children. This type of creativity leads them to have a worthwhile leisure time because it makes them busy and at the same time generate additional income.
In conclusion, modern technology did not lessen the creativity of people to enjoy their leisure time, instead it became a way for them to explore new options and enjoy it in a more fun and resourceful way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, still, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03825136612 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63436156399 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.6228543595 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.846153846 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1538461538 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139239045127 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546356097656 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412689974679 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981101230037 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304892716221 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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