Request your manager to stay back for some extra days after the Training Tell him what were the benefits from the training why would you ;like to stay back when will you be back
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to request you for an extra 5 days stay in New York after the completion of the training, I am planning to visit a specialist doctor for my Leg injuries.
Let me first thank you for giving me this opportunity to attend this fruitful training, It was informative and the entire team has benefitted from this experience. The Market capture strategy session was significant and a detailed explanation will definitely help us in creating our business plans in future.
The reason to write this letter is because I would like to request an extra 5 days stay here in New York as i would like to visit the doctor who is well-known for his treatment of leg injuries. Last year, during a football match I had twisted my ankle and since then I have difficulty in walking and standing for long. Since, I have not felt any relief after consulting with the local doctor's back home, I would like to see if this doctor can help me in some way.
I will be back on Saturday and will join the office on Monday. I hope you will consider this request. Looking forward for a positive reply.
Your's Sincerely,
Jane Do
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| 2019-07-08 | shaina.raphela | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to request you ...
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Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I am writing this letter to request you for an extra 5 days stay in New York aft...
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Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s. Let me first thank you for giving me this opportunity to attend this fruit...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ruitful training, It was informative and the entire team has benefitted from this...
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Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... help us in creating our business plans in future. The reason to write this letter is...
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Line 7, column 33, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...re. The reason to write this letter is because I would like to request an extra 5 days...
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Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...n extra 5 days stay here in New York as i would like to visit the doctor who is w...
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r a positive reply. Yours Sincerely, Jane Do
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56038647343 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53011915771 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.5431051356 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279435034531 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101211332507 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652342706907 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166804306601 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575681270245 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.