You have just come back from a holiday overseas. When you arrived back, you discovered that the airline had lost your suitcase. Write to the Customer Relations department of the airline. In your letter
explain the situation
describe the suitcase and its contents
say what you want the airline to do
Dear sir or madam,
I am Harry Martin, last week I made a round trip from New york to Delhi for vacation. When I reached back, I got shocked to hear that your airlines has misplaced my luggage. I am writing this letter to complain you about the same and provide me a compensation for this mistake.
Let me explain you in detail, Like every year , This summer I made a trip to India to visit my family and relatives. I booked a two-way ticket of United airlines, MY ticket number is UA4578. Unfortunately, When I returned I did not find my bag on the belt , after waiting for two hours, I asked the manager at airport and they ensured that I will receive my bag within 24 hours but rather I received a mail that my luggage has been lost. This was like a nightmare for me because I brought so many Indian clothes which are hard to shop here in USA.
Actually it was a 15'' red colour american tourister suitcase. It includes my clothes , 15'' dell laptop and Nikon camera, the approximate cost of these products is 5000$. I want you to investigate at your level and try to find my suitcase. For your information, I even took the premium insurance which covers the total loss and my insurance number is AI5486.
If you cannot provide me my suitcase then as a compensation refund my ticket price and cost of suitcase including its item. I hope you will consider my complaint seriously and take necessary action as soon as possible.
Waiting for a positive revert from you soon.
Yours Sincerely
Harry Martin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir or madam, I am Harry Martin, last week I made a r...
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Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e explain you in detail, Like every year , This summer I made a trip to India to v...
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Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...turned I did not find my bag on the belt , after waiting for two hours, I asked th...
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Line 7, column 84, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...urister suitcase. It includes my clothes , 15 dell laptop and Nikon camera, the ap...
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Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'laptop' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'laptops'.
Suggestion: laptops
...tcase. It includes my clothes , 15 dell laptop and Nikon camera, the approximate cost ...
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Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$5000'.
Suggestion: $5000
...e approximate cost of these products is 5000$. I want you to investigate at your leve...
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Line 7, column 357, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...loss and my insurance number is AI5486. If you cannot provide me my suitcase the...
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Line 9, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e necessary action as soon as possible. Waiting for a positive revert from you s...
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Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...revert from you soon. Yours Sincerely Harry Martin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 54.0 32.9175257732 164% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 275.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51636363636 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55098621441 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614545454545 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 290.88556701 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7583733205 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17973760737 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694102160382 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591232449674 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115409219348 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409361270397 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.