Climate change is now an accepted threat to our planet, but there is not enough political action to control excessive consumerism and pollution.
Do you agree?
It is undeniable that climate change is one of the most hazardous global threat we face. The effects of such global phenomenon are no longer experienced only by environmentalist and scientists, but also being endured by general global citizen. The two main causes that related each other of this ongoing event are consumerism and pollution. While it is true that some actions have been taken, I would argue that we need much more actions to deal with those causes.
We live in era where the consumerism comes in higher rate more than ever before. Today’s people largely want to buy more goods and...
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